{"id":432,"date":"2019-04-13T07:59:09","date_gmt":"2019-04-12T21:59:09","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/?p=432"},"modified":"2019-04-13T07:59:14","modified_gmt":"2019-04-12T21:59:14","slug":"improving-copy-on-premium-subscription-screen","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/2019\/04\/improving-copy-on-premium-subscription-screen\/","title":{"rendered":"Improving Copy on Premium Subscription Screen"},"content":{"rendered":"\nI hired a copywriter to improve the text (copy) on the Premium Subscription screen in Safe Vision app.\n\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Before:\n\n<\/h3>\n\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"600\" height=\"967\" data-attachment-id=\"433\" data-permalink=\"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/2019\/04\/improving-copy-on-premium-subscription-screen\/copy-before\/\" data-orig-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-before.png?fit=600%2C967&amp;ssl=1\" data-orig-size=\"600,967\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;orientation&quot;:&quot;0&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"copy-before\" data-image-description=\"\" data-image-caption=\"\" data-large-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-before.png?fit=600%2C967&amp;ssl=1\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-before.png?resize=600%2C967\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-433\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-before.png?w=600&amp;ssl=1 600w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-before.png?resize=186%2C300&amp;ssl=1 186w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 600px) 100vw, 600px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\">After:<\/h3>\n\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"600\" height=\"1335\" data-attachment-id=\"434\" data-permalink=\"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/2019\/04\/improving-copy-on-premium-subscription-screen\/copy-after\/\" data-orig-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-after.png?fit=600%2C1335&amp;ssl=1\" data-orig-size=\"600,1335\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;orientation&quot;:&quot;0&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"copy-after\" data-image-description=\"\" data-image-caption=\"\" data-large-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-after.png?fit=460%2C1024&amp;ssl=1\" src=\"https:\/\/i2.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-after.png?fit=460%2C1024\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-434\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-after.png?w=600&amp;ssl=1 600w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-after.png?resize=135%2C300&amp;ssl=1 135w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/copy-after.png?resize=460%2C1024&amp;ssl=1 460w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 600px) 100vw, 600px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator\"\/>\n\n\n\n\nI think\u00a0<a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/punchlinecopy.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">Lianna from\u00a0Punchline Conversion Copywriting<\/a>\u00a0did a great job &#8211; thank you very much Lianna!\n\n\n\nIt looks like the conversion rate didn&#8217;t improve much though:<br>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"604\" height=\"307\" data-attachment-id=\"435\" data-permalink=\"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/2019\/04\/improving-copy-on-premium-subscription-screen\/conversion-rate-2019-04-08\/\" data-orig-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/conversion-rate-2019-04-08.png?fit=889%2C452&amp;ssl=1\" data-orig-size=\"889,452\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;orientation&quot;:&quot;0&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"conversion-rate-2019-04-08\" data-image-description=\"\" data-image-caption=\"\" data-large-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/conversion-rate-2019-04-08.png?fit=604%2C307&amp;ssl=1\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/conversion-rate-2019-04-08.png?resize=604%2C307\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-435\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/conversion-rate-2019-04-08.png?w=889&amp;ssl=1 889w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/conversion-rate-2019-04-08.png?resize=300%2C153&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/conversion-rate-2019-04-08.png?resize=768%2C390&amp;ssl=1 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 604px) 100vw, 604px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n\nConversion rate is number of people that started trial premium subscription divided by number of people that looked at the Premium screen in a given week.\n\n\n\nRecent key metrics:\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"604\" height=\"282\" data-attachment-id=\"436\" data-permalink=\"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/2019\/04\/improving-copy-on-premium-subscription-screen\/key-metrics-2019-04-08\/\" data-orig-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/key-metrics-2019-04-08.png?fit=900%2C420&amp;ssl=1\" data-orig-size=\"900,420\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;orientation&quot;:&quot;0&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"key-metrics-2019-04-08\" data-image-description=\"\" data-image-caption=\"\" data-large-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/key-metrics-2019-04-08.png?fit=604%2C282&amp;ssl=1\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/key-metrics-2019-04-08.png?resize=604%2C282\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-436\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/key-metrics-2019-04-08.png?w=900&amp;ssl=1 900w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/key-metrics-2019-04-08.png?resize=300%2C140&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/images\/2019\/04\/key-metrics-2019-04-08.png?resize=768%2C358&amp;ssl=1 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 604px) 100vw, 604px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n(Acquisition means a parent installed the app and signed up for an account. Activation &#8211; a child watched at least 10 videos on the same or the next day after installed the app. Retention &#8211; a child watched at least 5 videos day after installed or the next day.)\n\n\n\nMeg from Home School Game School recently\u00a0<a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"http:\/\/homeschoolgameschool.com\/how-to-block-channels-on-youtube-youtube-kids\/\" target=\"_blank\">reviewed Safe Vision app<\/a>\u00a0on her blog and added it to her &#8216;<a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"http:\/\/homeschoolgameschool.com\/best-kindle-fire-apps-for-toddlers\/\" target=\"_blank\">The Best Kindle Fire Apps for Toddlers &amp; Preschoolers<\/a>&#8216; list &#8211; yay!<br>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I hired a copywriter to improve the text (copy) on the Premium Subscription screen in Safe Vision app. Before: After: I think\u00a0Lianna from\u00a0Punchline Conversion Copywriting\u00a0did a great job &#8211; thank you very much Lianna! It looks like the conversion rate didn&#8217;t improve much though: Conversion rate is number of people that started trial premium subscription &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/2019\/04\/improving-copy-on-premium-subscription-screen\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Improving Copy on Premium Subscription Screen<\/span> <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":true,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[6],"tags":[35],"class_list":["post-432","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-business","tag-safe-vision"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack-related-posts":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/432","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=432"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/432\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=432"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=432"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/chuchuva.com\/pavel\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=432"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}